Sunday, 21 October 2012

Storyboard of Ideas: First draft

The general feedback we recieved was:

- The still of the girl lying on her bed surrounded by her friends would be too difficult to film- not enough room and the emphasis of her condition would be minimised by the amount of people in the room.
- Still 6 of the girl lip syncing as she gets off the bus- we decided that this didn't really reveal much about her character or relate to the story, so we will change that in our second storyboard.
- The crossing off the dates on her calendar was also irrelevant to the story, so we will cut that part out to save time in our second storyboard.

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