Storyboard- Second draft

This is our second storyboard for our music video. We made some improvements based on the feedback we recieved for our first draft. The feedback we recieved on this one were:

- The drawings aren't clear- for our final draft we will improve our drawings to make it clearer.
- There should be an event that matches the lyrics more, or has more significance to the story after the first chorus.
- The theme of drugs is too cliché- we are hoping to replace this with something that's more effective and suitable to the rest of the story.
- The two choruses should match to maintain continuity.