This is our final storyboard. All of the members of my group including myself are happy with this storyboard. We also showed the final storyboard to members of our target audience, as their view on the final storyboard is the most crucial opinion needed. We showed it to three girls and two boys, and four out of five were completely happy with it. The remaining member felt as though we should include a voiceover, as they weren't sure what was going on. I discussed this with my group and we agreed that a voiceover would make the story clearer and easier to understand. Therefore, because we are happy we can now start working on what we want our artist to be like as well as the digipak drafts. The improvements we made can be seen below:
- We added a voiceover just in case the drawings or captions weren't clear enough.
- We changed the drug scene to a scene that helped communicate her feelings more to the audience.
- We asked a peer to do the illustrations for us in order to make sure they were totally clear.
- We re-shuffled the timings in order for each scene to have enough detail.
- The two choruses now match- we thought this would make more sense and maintain continuity.
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